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I like the last stanza. The lines “yearning only for a discerning eye / to read their secrets from the Dance of skies” in particular are fantastic. I think your ability to craft an image with vivid language and also address a profound topic is remarkable. Combining those elements makes for a great poem!

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Thank you so much! Also one of my favorite lines, for sure. That and, "F'r me, it's a paradox..." If you enjoyed these so far, I hope you stick around for what's coming this month -- there are many more vivid images, profound topics of discussion, and memorable lines landing soon.

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